Fruiity ?

Haha so i have never been told this was illegal in writing. But there is always a first. o as you may have read my paper below Catalog Assignment paper one. Well i got my grade back with some advice here is the advice from Mr. Z "You lost points because your informal writing style. An APA paper should be more formal. While I was not personally offended by your fruity comment, in a state college you would have been forced to do counseling and community service and flunk the class. Be careful." Wow is all i can say to that lol. So let me read the fruity line he was talking about. "The demographic is really easy to tell in this catalog. It is towards female cyclists. I think some things are compatible for men and women. Mainly like water bottles and some other gear. But id have to say the men buying the pink bike seat or the women's jersey with the flowers on it might be a little fruity. With the demographic being so narrow they have to be careful whom they send it out to." That was the line from my paper. Well its good i just got out of counseling right after i had written this paper. lol

1 comments:

Anonymous said...

Lame... a college professor wouldn't do anything but give you a bad grade. I hate high school teachers. They're so full of shit half of the time. Even in college, some of the professors are jackasses, but most of them will level with you.

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